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Wednesday, March 3, 2010

Writing Magic

I wrote a grant to bring David Moreland, an educational magician, to our school to do his "Writing Magic" presentation. We were all blown away by his tricks!
Here he is with a magic whiteboard. The picture he drew came to life!

And then, our very own Josh helped him to turn a single white handkerchief placed into an empty bag into a long strand of colors!


But in addition to the tricks, David taught us three important lessons about writing a story.

1) Does your story have a beginning, middle, and end?
2) How can I show instead of tell?
3) Where can I add more variety?

2 comments:

Niskua said...

It was fun waching him!

the great maomaker (silas) said...

magic umm.....ummm.....is ummmm.... COOLLL!!!!!!